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Music echoes.
A blush, barely visible in the night
He asks the question, the answer he knows.
Right there I let my confusion and curiosity fight.

“Do you wanna dance?”
I meet his eyes once, at a glance
“Slow dancing is an excuse to get closer to somebody.”
Yet, he drew nearer to my rigid body.

“Want to dance?”
This time it was I.
His chocolate eyes blinked no lie.
His timid hands curled around my side
And mine, around his neck.

Then warmth rippled in long wavelengths.
Timid, tickled, tranceful
The wrinkles in his face caressing my face
Shuffling our feet in clumsy grace.

I let myself go,
Swaying, swooning silently.
Poised, panicking.

Disappointed, the song was short.
©2008 ~DNAngela
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So yeah,
I wrote this in the fall.
To whom, you may guess. But don't guess too hard.

I know it seems I'm falling in and out of relationships everytime I'm updating my journal, but I really, really wanna say that this was one of the best moments as an angsty, horny teen.

Regardless of how long this lasts... even if it's just one beat of the heart. But I'll remember this.
Something, somebody who made me realize that there's more to life than cute guys.

Listening to Alicia Keys, still.


Everything means nothing,
If I ain't got you, baby. :]
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~cii-chan7:iconcii-chan7: May 8, 2008, 5:26:11 PM
aww~ you're a great poet C: so romantic!

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~DNAngela:iconDNAngela: May 8, 2008, 11:33:17 PM
Awww, thankie. :]

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*bohemianpoets:iconbohemianpoets: May 12, 2008, 10:46:45 PM
incredible, wow.. i'm so feeling this

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~DNAngela:iconDNAngela: May 16, 2008, 10:39:54 PM
Thank youuuu.
God, it was the besssttt dance ever.
High school is still incredibly awesome.
I mean, you can never outgrow the dances. :]

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No RULES, just ART.
사랑. 가족. 친구들. 아트. 음악. = 내 삶.